Poetry about Growing Up-Opportunities

Opportunities
SuJin Kim
World, full of opportunities
Giving people all the chances
Try something new,
Develop different perspectives 
About yourself and the world around you. 
Expose yourself to fresh experiences, 
You 'll discover new strategies 
Follow your dreams and don't close your eyes
Go with the hardships
And you'll be surprised on the things you can do

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  1. UnknownJanuary 9, 2018 at 11:05 PM

    I enjoyed this poem because I can relate to the part about developing different perspectives. I believe the poem gives relatable aspects towards growing up

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  2. julianJanuary 9, 2018 at 11:08 PM

    The poem has good choice of words that make readers think about their futures and what opportunities they have missed in the past. This poem also can create a motivation to readers.

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  3. DahliaJanuary 9, 2018 at 11:09 PM

    I like how clear your poem shows a clear point about not wasting any opportunities that are given to you in life. But one thing that I am a bit confused about, is how opportunities is related to growing up, and you should also add the connection of that in your poem.

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